Ambition
Salvador Dali once said "Intelligence without ambition is a bird without wings." This quote is relating to a bird that needs wings to even survive. For humans we need our mind to achieve things. Not one person is successful without a knowledge of something. I agree with this quote because people have to strive to achieve there goal; success isn't handed to you. This quote is clearly seen in the reading The Hunger Games By Suzanne Collins. Ambition is Katniss trying to do so many things at one time and her trying to get food on the table, have the best future for Prim, and dont forget face the Hunger Games will not come easily.
Good paragraph, some of your sentences were clear. You used "I" in your paragraph and that needs to be fixed. In your thesis statement try to word it a little bit more clearly. Other than that it was good dude.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did your paragraph, but you used a I in your paragraph. everything else looks good.
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